The only residents remaining in the small town of Miners Hill are spirits. It has come to their realization that they are dead, after little Sally O’Keefe shoved her twin brother into a wall and he fell straight through. Since then, the spirits of Miners Hill (who fervently object to the term “ghosts”) capitalize their newfound powers with childlike excitements.
It is this same strand of curiosity that leads little Sally O’Keefe, ten years older since the aforementioned shove, to wander the circumference of the mysterious Barrier that keeps the spirits out of society. Sally is in one of her bitter moods; after all, the 16-year-old lives in a 6-year-old’s body. But she also believes in the future, and she does happen to be the most dedicated Youth Explorer.
Perhaps that is why she is the one at the Barrier when it breaks.
Words: 130. For Finish-the-story Monday. I struggled a lot trying to write past events in present tense. Urk.
The corresponding piece/prequel: “for whom the bell tolls“.
✪ Angie
Nice work Angie Lin ~ You sent me into the ethereal spiritual world with the curiosity to learn the form of the threatened vengeance. 🙂
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Thanks, John! Glad I sparked something! ✪
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A good take on the prompt. 🙂 I’m a little concerned about what a bitter child ghost might do once she’s past the barrier.
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Ooh, I suppose that’s up to your imagination! ✪
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What does happen next? We need to know! Well done!!!!!
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Haha, thank you! ✪
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Better to be at the Barrier when it breaks, then at the Dam.
But wait, the water would go right through her. So, no matter – literally.
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Oh dear gosh- you are the best. I think you win the prize for Wittiest Comment. ✪
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Sounds like she broke (or her presence broke it) the barrier that separates the spirits of Miners Hill from live able bodied people. Wonder what that is going to create? Great story!
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Maybe! And what is that going to create? A lot of chaos, that’s what! Thanks again! ✪
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What happens next??? I enjoyed your story Angie – nicely done! Thank you for writing again for the MFtS challenge! I look forward to what you come up with next time. Be well… ^..^
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Who knows? Stay tuned haha! ✪
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🐻 Will do!
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