The crew of the Angel Flame received orders to head out. The mini barge, lovingly nicknamed after the excursion’s prize goal, picked up speed and cruised away from the New Jersey shore. Matt McDaniels clung at the railing, eyes fixed upon the undisturbed waters. His crewmate, Mechanic Jack, checked the hatch one last time and beckoned his friend inside.
“There’ll be plenty of time for worrying later,” Mechanic Jack offered. “We’ve got a strategy session right now.”
Matt nodded, inhaling once before following his friend belowdeck. “I don’t think we’ll be seeing much more of these calm waters.”
“‘course not,” Jack laughed dryly. He glanced at Matt, who grinned back at him.
“Midst the waves, through sharktooth gates, there you’ll find the Angel Flame,” the two recited at each other and clasped hands, as they had done many a time as boys.
“Our dreams are finally being realized, buddy,” Jack said. “Let’s go find that darned thing.”
146 words not counting the given sentence. This was for “Monday’s Finish the Story“. Not sure if I’ll be doing these every week, but it was a nice challenge. PSA: I have absolutely no knowledge of nautical… stuff. So yeah.
[EDIT] Corresponding short story here: “our last winter“
✪ Angie
Treasure hunting! Great fun! Nicely done.
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Very much so! Thanks! ✪
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Lovely story of two childhood friends realizing their dream together. I loved it.
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Aww, thank you! ✪
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Off on a treasure hunt… so exciting to realize their childhood dreams!!! Loved this!
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Eep, thanks! ✪
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I love the rhyme – nicely done 🙂
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Thank you, kind soul! ✪
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Great story! Off to find some mysterious artefact perhaps? From the rhyme it sounds like it will be a dangerous journey.
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That’s correct! Thank you! ✪
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Nicely done! What is it that they are looking for? When one asks a question like this, then one knows they have met the challenge! You did great Angie! Thank you for your contribution to the Mondays Finish the Story challenge! Be well…. ^..^
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Thanks! Sorry for not making that clear; they’re looking for the Angel Flame (which they named their barge after). Have a nice day too! ✪
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No need for an apology, as I was letting you know when one asks questions like that you have piqued the interest of the reader! This is a good thing! Be well…
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Okay, phew! You too! ✪
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Hugs to you my dear!
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I really enjoyed this little tale and thought the ending was great.
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Thanks so much! Glad you thought so!
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Ooo, I love a good treasure hunt. Nice one.
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Thank you kindly! ✪
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