Many, many ages ago, there was a stone mountain in the southern corner of Ireland shaped in a peculiar heart formation. One particularly electric night, a bolt of lightning shot off a large boulder and sent it flying down to the field below. It stayed there for countless centuries, and lent shade to many a lovers’ picnic.
But destiny would not have it. For a vicious storm passed and another fateful lightning bolt struck, and suddenly, that absolute monolith was split into two.
At first, the divided boulder mourned its separation. But as time passed, the two stones grew so accustomed to their new positions that it appeared as if they had never been one stone at all. That, one may argue, was the greatest tragedy of the stone mountain.
Word count: 130. For a flash fiction challenge. Well, I tried.
✪ Angie
It’s rings true to me. Love the heart stone now broken. Well done!
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Thank you very much!! ✪
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And you did really well 🙂
I can imagine the stones splitting in two!
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I like the personification and the Irish setting. Also the use of the word “monolith,” which is an excellent word.
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A pretty sturdy word if I may say so myself! Thanks again! ✪
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And then there were two. Even boulders can adapt to change. Nice story..😍
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That’s true! Thank you! ✪
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A lovely response to the prompt I really little stories like this – there are lots of similar myths in the folklore of so many places!
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Aw, thanks so much! I agree, folklore can be just so quaint and cozy 🙂
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It’s interesting how you write as if the stone’s had feelings. I forget the English Literature term right now but it’s a great device. Great job!
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Personification, I think! Thanks so much! ✪
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Personification, I think! Thanks so much!! ✪
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This is awesome little work
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Thanks!! 🙂 ✪
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I like that the stone was heartshaped and then was separated into two stones by a lightening strike which became a tragedy for Stone Mountain. Great story Angie! I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for participating in FFfAW challenge!
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Ah, glad you appreciated that element! Thanks for hosting! ✪
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You’re welcome! My pleasure.
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