“Emma, can’t you come bowling with us?”
“Sorry, but I’m broke.”
“How come?”
“I bought a selfie stick.”
“That’s… interesting.”
“It was surprisingly more expensive than I had expected.”
“Okay.”
“Oh, it wasn’t for me.”
“Mhmm.”
“Honest.”
“Does your dad know?”
“He does now. Dad loves his new selfie stick.”
For the 5o-word story challenges. “Selfie stick” was the one I attempted today. And failed, because that was just a bunch of dialogue, and not at all a story. Blargh.
✪ muddied thoughts 
I don’t think you failed. This dialogue is really interesting! 🙂
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Thank you very much!! 🙂 ✪
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This is your best one! There is nothing wrong with dialogue. I like this one. You can always go back and edit.
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Aw, thanks haha! And that’s true~ ✪
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Had to comment on this. It was wonderful
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Thanks, bro- glad you approve. ✪
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You told the story via the dialogue. Well done.
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Aw, really? Thank you! ✪
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