grace

She was a dancer from Brooklyn- poised, heart-faced, and graced with long legs. She performed in competitions and shows and won ribbon after medal after trophy.

“She’ll make it big,” the critics raved.

“She’s already big,” the crowd roared.

Then the dancer from Brooklyn retired in seclusion, preferring quieter things.


While this one wasn’t as good, I’d say it’s more a “story” than a “moment”, so that’s improvement, eh? For the 50-word story challenge found here. The prompt was “grace”.

✪ Angie

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2 thoughts on “grace

  1. This is definitely a story. I think if you were to make it smaller, you could have a great 50-word story. Combine your knack for identifying a great moment with this sense of story, and you will be golden.

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