Delphine always wanted to pilot her father’s plane and when he forgot his keys on her tenth birthday, she knew that taking off would be easy.
Everything was already in order: the gears, the locks, the control board. Not that Delphine needed it be set before she started; the girl had seen her father fly innumerable times, and she could recite the position of each switch and pedal with her eyes closed. But it was nice, she supposed, that the plane was prepared to take off before she even entered it. Because as her father rummaged their small home for his car keys, Delphine would take the Marshall Jane for a short spin and come back down before Pops even noticed anything awry.
As she swooped in the air, enjoying the unique closeness to the sky and the sun and world above, the newly ten-year-old remembered something she ought to have considered before she even began. Taking off would be easy. Landing, on the other hand, was a completely different story.
Word count: 145. For Monday’s Finish-the-Story. I had some trouble with the given sentence start, but I think I managed through. Ah, Delphine. Maybe her father pre-set the plane to teach her a lesson… who knows.
✪ Angie
Lovely story. And it’s her birthday, I’m sure she’ll land without a problem! 🙂
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Thanks + I’d hope so too!! ✪
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Well done! She is sure to land without a problem!
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I believe so! ✪
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Lovely… smart little girl… she’ll get down just fine. Well done.
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Yup she will! Thanks. ✪
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Almost like writing stories…how we do the grand finish? Nice one.
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Nice comparison! Thank you! ✪
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Great story Angie! Yours is very similar to mine. 🙂
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Is it? I ought to check your story out then! ✪
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Blimey! Great story… but I’m worried for her bumpy landing!!
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Same here! But I do believe she’ll pull through! ✪
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The coming back to earth is always the difficult bit – great story.
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That’s right! Thanks! ✪
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Well done
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Thanks! ✪
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Well done Angie! I truly enjoyed your story! The finish can ofttimes be harder than the start. Thanks for continuing to write for the MFtS challenge and be well… ^..^
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It’s no problem at all! I should thank *you* for hosting the challenge! ✪
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It is my fun for the week! 😀
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I love this! It works as a story and as a metaphor for so much in life.
Really well done!
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Ooh, thinking deep! Thank you! ✪
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You’re welcome. You’ve got a talent there your know.
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Ah, flattered. 🙂 ✪
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Hopefully she knows how to work the radio and they can talk her in – she sounds fearless enough to handle it. Well done!
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Ooh, that’s true! Thank you so much! ✪
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