the top is for yesterday (kurt called me “dumb”)
below is the skate park where i was left out
lies from my sister comprise the stack under
‘neath those are too many cruel moments to count
i stack up my problems one by two by three
it wells in my gut as it climbs to my throat
a fearful foundation a tower is built
like a stack of pancakes but not quite as sweet
For this week’s Poetry 101 Rehab: “stack“. I guess instead of “bottling up your feelings”, the speaker is “stacking up his or her problems”.
✪ Angie
Very powerful imagery; particularly in the second verse. Thank you.
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Awesome, thank *you*! ✪
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I love this. It’s painful and feels so real.
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🙂 I’m glad you thought so. ✪
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Your poem stacks high with me! Very nice! 👏
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I see what you did there! Thank you~ ✪
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I like how you used ‘stack’ so effectively Angie, well done.
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Thanks so much! Glad you thought it worked. ✪
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A very good, and painful, contribution to poetry 101 rehab…thank you for staying the course!
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No problem at all! 🙂 ✪
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