this is the skin i live in
this wretched, wretched flesh
who bears scars and marks and
little reminders that i am still alive
who rises and falls with each breath i take
and closed eyes can only do so much
to calm my shaking fingers shaking legs
only shaking my head
wondering how i ended up looking like this
this is the skin i live in
and some days (most days) i want to tear myself out of it
as if underneath there will be pretty platinum someone
For the prompt “skin“. I’ve really been enjoying these poetry prompts each week, and I do believe I’m starting to get a hang of the art. And yup, another darker piece from me, but whattup.
✪ Angie
Oh dear, an android poem 😀 This interpretation didn’t occur to me, what I felt with your poem was both an occasional discomfort about your skin and at the same time a more profound acceptance of it. I like that.
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Interesting interpretation! It’s not what I had in mind, but I do love your take on it. Glad you liked it! ✪
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I like the variety of possibilities behind the poem’s literal interpretation. Suggests, oddly, being turned into an android.
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That’s a really unique interpretation! 🙂 ✪
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What can I say?!? 😀
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