“It’s a bit chilly, don’t you think?” Stacey Callaine murmured to her boyfriend, as the two lounged upon the gazebo railing.
“Almost winter,” remarked Jack, dropping his jacket on his girlfriend’s shoulders. “Next week, there’ll be snow.”
Stacey hummed. “With snow, there’ll be sledding. Hot cocoa. The holidays…” She latched onto Jack’s gloved hand. “I can’t wait to spend Christmas with you.”
“Me too,” Jack replied, uncharacteristically somber. He stared out onto the park landscape, at the barren trees. Their dead leaves clung to the wet ground.
In a few months, he and his buddy would be out in the Atlantic, searching for the mythical Angel Flame. He wondered how Stacey would react when he told her. Jack really didn’t want her to leave him. But, he supposed, he was more worried that he would have to leave her, and not in a temporary, I’m-going-on-an-expedition kind of way. Jack was afraid he’d leave for good. After all, no one had discovered the Angel Flame and lived to tell the tale.
Word count: 170. For this photo prompt. Read the corresponding flash fiction here: “adventure on the angel flame” (prequel? sequel? either way). First time doing this particular challenge. ’twas nice.
✪ Angie
Excellent story and great for a continuation. I’m wondering what her response will be and how she handles it! She seems so happy for a person who’s bubble is about to burst!
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Very true! Glad you liked it! ✪
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I have a feeling Stacey isn’t going to find it funny when Jack admits he’s leaving. This story really gives room for a lot more. And the angel flame? Well done.
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Oh, she definitely won’t. Thanks for reading! ✪
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An engaging story, Angie, which leaves us wanting to know more… What is this mythical Angel Flame and will Jack find it? More importantly, will he live to tell the tale and return to Stacey? Good story! 🙂
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Thanks so much! 🙂 Perhaps I’ll answer those two questions in further installments! ✪
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I’ll look forward to reading them! 🙂
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Good story. I hope Jack returns to her safely – after having found the Angel Flame, of course, and becoming the one who lives to tell the tale. 🙂
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I hope for a happy ending as well! Thank you! ✪
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Good story. I hope Jack comes back.
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I hope so too! ✪
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Excellent! The last paragraph was a real grabber! I hope he makes it back and I like how you brought in the “Angel Flame.” I have a suggestion. In the second sentence in the last paragraph, take out one of the “to”s.
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Thanks! Oh, whoops, must have missed that. I’ll edit it out. Plus, it’ll lower my word count. Thanks for catching that! ✪
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No problem! I never know if I should or not. I miss a lot in my writing and need them pointed out.
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I suppose it’s best to point them out, but that may just be me. If they’re appreciative, you’ve helped them. If not, at least they’re aware of their error! ✪
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Thank you. 🙂
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